My Back Story

Ok, this may not be as good as i wanted, but I cant write as well unless I want to. (This will be in 1st person in the MAG world) Just so you know, this is jsut the 1st paragraph, if you want the rest tell me you do and ill put it up.

I was tired of running, tired of the same monotonous shit that had gotten me into this posistion. I had been running from Raven ever since my failed hijack of a SVER transport truck. They wouldnt stand for failure. I tried all I could to reason with them, but to no avail. So i was locked up, was to be put to death the next day, and i would been if I didn't realize that the sewerI were right next to my cell. So I waited for the guards to make their round and stole his key (I know it sounds like oblivion).I unlock the door, and slowly opened the manhole and jumped inside. Before I knew it, I was on the run again, trying to make up for the mistake I had made. I fhad family that was closely tied to Raven's top authorities. I knew that if i couldn't stop them alone, I would need help, and the only people left I could trust and knew could take down Raven was a group of soldiers from a PMC in Alaska. This is my story.

Nice Back story

so i was right..... mine is sure as hell better then this!!!!!
i mean look at it, mines SOO long and GREAT! ur's is so tiny and short

but thats only the first paragraph nightmare...

put up the rest of it! its looking pretty good

ya i was there when he came running to us

1st, you joined after me, and 2nd, "running to us", i wasnt a scared little puppy

This is either going to be part 2/3,2/4, or if i can get enough, 2/5.

As, I walked along the sewers, I noticed something gleeming out of the corner of my eye. I went over to investigate it, and found out that it was a slightly used G36C. I was completely in awe that the guards would leave a gun out like this. So I picked it up and made sure it was working properly. As I contined my walk dont the dark and dank tunnel, I started getting paranoid. It finnaly set in that I was on the run. I was about to give up and turn myself in, but i found the exit. I crawled out and looked around i was in Peru. As my eye got used to the light. I saw somthing on a peak not to far away. It was...

Eliteassassin479 wrote:This is either going to be part 2/3,2/4, or if i can get enough, 2/5.

As, I walked along the sewers, I noticed something gleeming out of the corner of my eye. I went over to investigate it, and found out that it was a slightly used G36C. I was completely in awe that the guards would leave a gun out like this. So I picked it up and made sure it was working properly. As I contined my walk dont the dark and dank tunnel, I started getting paranoid. It finnaly set in that I was on the run. I was about to give up and turn myself in, but i found the exit. I crawled out and looked around i was in Peru. As my eye got used to the light. I saw somthing on a peak not to far away. It was...

Nice your gonna do 2-3 more stories?

so far im liking it

no 2 or 3 more parts, and now this wont be 2/3 ive got to much to put into it still, lol

a slightly used G36? lucky guy. lol

just to tell ya

thisis a BACKSOTRY about how u joined Valor. not a narative....

if u gonna write a narative go to off topic, if you'll make a short very nice story of how u joined Valor like the rest of us did, rewrite it

it doesent matter bro, hes keepin it in one thread so is fine.

sorrty i havnt put anything up today, i was working really hard today so i havent had any time, i promise ill put it up ASAP, and BTW, nightmare, just because my story is better than your doesnt mean you have to bag on it. Your a better FPS player than me and you dont hear my whining, im pretty sure it was you that said to make it longer anyway

no offense but ur story isnt a background story, its just a story, mister spammer.... wait, i got an idea, i'll try it out...

Eliteassassin479 wrote:1st, you joined after me, and 2nd, "running to us", i wasnt a scared little puppy

wasnt much to me when you came running i was just a lowly scout sorry bud

@ nightmare, it is a background story, there isnt a set length that is has to be, you could make your a book over 200 post and i wouldnt give a damn

tight tight..